Write an essay (150 - 300 words) about this topic:
“Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, due to the development of the economy, people have a better living standard and working conditions. Besides, they are getting busier and busier with work and seem to have no time for their family and children. This leads to some problems such as children are becoming undisciplined than they ever been, that is really a matter of family and society. This matter will be clearly demonstrated in this writing.
To begin, people, especially young parents usually have a lot of works, they tend to work hard to earn more money to support their family and children. While they are so busy with working and going on business trips, almost their children are sent to schools or their grandparents' homes and they are just taken care by teachers and grandparents. Day after day the children may feel lack of concern from their parents and don't like to stay with mom and dad, even they don't want to talk to them or listen to them.
I think parents should spend more time in playing with them, encouraging them to study, and helping them with difficulties at school, by this way, we can make a close relationship among family's members to make a meaningful and happy family.
In conclusion, children are the base of society. Money can just give them things but they want love from parents only. Children are good and obedient when only receiving a good education and great concern from parents. Thus, give them your free time, but not only your money.