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Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
People have different views about how to ameliorate health, education, and trade for the poorer nations. Many argue that the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. I somewhat agree that action is necessary to help these poorer countries in such areas; however, I think that the main role in improving these areas still belongs to these poorer countries.
The first reason why I think the governments of wealthier countries should help the needier countries is for humanity. At first, nowadays the world is increasingly reaching to progress and civilization, so humanity is no longer confined within a country or territory but in the world. Therefore, helping poorer countries to get improvements in health, education, and trade is one of great humantarian actions. Moreover, this helps to shorten the gap between rich and poor as well as increase solidarity among countries, contributing to maintaining international peace and security.
Another reason is aiding the more indigent nations to improve health, education and trade will help developed countries define their positions and power of voice internationally. USA, for example, has supported Africa countries in resisting Ebola or Zika epidemic, which helps this country define its big role all over the world. Moreover, supporting other poorer countries to develop such areas helps wealthier nations take advantage of advertising their achievements in health, education, and trade, which helps them get many economic benefits from investment in such areas.
However, I also think that poorer nations should find solutions to achieve ameliorations in health, education, and trade. Firstly, finding ways to get improvements in such areas will help these countries give away the dependence of the economy and politics from wealthy countries. Secondly, finding the solution to improvements in health, education, and trade will not only encourage citizens’creation in utilizing domestic resources to develop their countries but also help these countries define their ability and reaffirm their positions in comparison with other countries.
In conclusion, I somewhat agree that the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for assisting the poorer nations out of their difficult conditions in such areas for humanity, their positions, and the power of voice worldwide. However, I also believe that these poorer countries should find solutions to achieve improvements in health, education, and trade.
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